"I love you," you said.
"No you don't," I said,
As I left the church.
"I love you," you said.
"No you don't," I said,
As I back stabbed my friends.
"I love you," you said.
"No you don't," I said,
As I drank the bottle of vodka.
"I love you," you said.
"No you don't," I said,
As I gave myself away.
"I love you," you said.
"No you don't," I said,
As I gambled to my last dollar.
"I love you," you said.
"No you don't," I said,
As I left the family I created.
"I love you," you said.
"No you don't," I said,
As I began to pull out my gun.
"I love you," you said.
"...Why?" I said,
My finger reaching for the trigger.
"I made you.
With my breath I gave you life.
You are perfect in my eyes.
I cried in despair when you left my side,
So one day I sacrificed my life,
To be with you again..."
"I love you," you said.
"I know," I said,
As I rejoiced in your arms once again.













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Eccl 12:13. 13 Now all has been heard; here is the conclusion of the matter: Fear God and keep his commandments, for this is the whole duty of man.
14 For God will bring every deed into judgment, including every hidden thing, whether it is good or evil.
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"It is too easy to be the echo. Be the voice."
"Be imitators of God, therefore, as dearly loved children and live a life of love, just as Christ loved us and gave himself up for us..." - Ephesians 5:1&2
The whole god-part, you leave it ambigous, not straight forward, and it gives the reader space to interpret the story for him/herself. Good, no, AWESOME job!
Keep it up
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Eccl 12:13. 13 Now all has been heard; here is the conclusion of the matter: Fear God and keep his commandments, for this is the whole duty of man.
14 For God will bring every deed into judgment, including every hidden thing, whether it is good or evil.
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"It is too easy to be the echo. Be the voice."
"Be imitators of God, therefore, as dearly loved children and live a life of love, just as Christ loved us and gave himself up for us..." - Ephesians 5:1&2
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"Be not forgetful to entertain strangers, for thereby some have entertained angels unawares."
In the real sense of the word,
Awe-some.
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